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03 November 2011 @ 11:13 pm
 
For The First Time, Ch. 3



Fandom:  The OC

Author: Theresa

Beta:  beachtree

Pairing: Ryan/Summer

Rating: K

Disclaimer:  Same as all the others, lol.

Author's Note:   Thanks to Nat (Sweetgirl465 on FanForum) for making the beautiful banner to my story!    :)    You can see what else I have to say about this chapter and what's coming up for the rest of the story on FF.net.   Keep in mind that characters like Sandy, Seth, Luke, Taylor, and others WILL be in this story eventually.   :)  

Okay, here is chapter 3:    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7478697/3/
 
 
Current Location: Floor
Current Mood: blahblah
Current Music: Eminem
 
 
 
tdnk64: early OCtdnk64 on November 5th, 2011 06:11 pm (UTC)
Well worth the wait. I feel so very sorry for this young couple, trying to be so strong for themselves and each other. Having been through a lot of heartbreak in my time I know how tiring that can be!

Well written wonderful characters in Ryan & Summer. Really looking forward to Ch 4.
sportsmed14sportsmed14 on November 6th, 2011 04:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much for your beautiful reviews and continual support with this fic! I'm very grateful! *HUGS* And you've got it! That's exactly what this story is about. I hadn't seen very many fics like this where there was a true, major struggle and the characters stuck together so I wanted to write one. :)
sarak14sarak14 on November 6th, 2011 01:27 pm (UTC)
This chapter is too sad for me! Love R/S but hope things brighten up soon.
sportsmed14sportsmed14 on November 6th, 2011 04:18 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the review! *HUG* lol, but angst and sadness are my middle name! I'm sorry you thought the chapter was too sad, but I think I'm pacing it realistically for this fic because really the fic in general is about two people who go through the ringer and everything keeps getting worse and worse - they both have insecurities and with each new obstacle it will test their marriage, but their love for each other is so strong that even through everything, they make it out and stick together in the end without divorce, and I promise Ch. 6 and Ch. 7 are VERY happy and fluffy. :)

Things will brighten up, but not completely in one chapter. It will be a gradual progression. One more thing will go "right" in each of the next chapters but there will still be plenty of things going wrong. Both characters are in a funk and miserable so chapter 4 is not much more "happy" than this one. I hope you are okay with that. But Ch. 6 is very happy. Ch. 7 is even happier, but this is based on the song too so I want to stay with the pace of the song so keep that in mind too. :)
sarak14sarak14 on November 6th, 2011 05:54 pm (UTC)
Oh, I'll stick with you, have no fear :)
sportsmed14sportsmed14 on November 6th, 2011 07:16 pm (UTC)
YAY! :D Thanks.